You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that children would benefit if they attended nursery school before primary school, while others think that children should stay all day with their families.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Some make the pragmatic argument that children will get more benefits if they go to the nursery school before primary school, while the others believe that children should spend time with their parents during their formative years. In my opinion, there are more advantages than disadvantages to sending children to a nursery school.
There is no denying the fact that young children need the love and attention of their parents. This, however, does not mean that they should spend the whole day at home in the company of their parents and grandparents. Actually, the years between 3 and 5 are crucial for the development of a child. This is a great time for them to get exposed to the world outside their home. A nursery school is the perfect place for this. Most nursery schools operate for only 3 or 4 hours a day. So even if a child attends a nursery school he or she will still have plenty of time to stay with his or her parents. In other words, the nursery school will have no real impact on his or her emotional wellbeing or bonding with her parents.
At the same time, children can learn a lot of real-world skills from the nursery school. They get to play with several children of their age. This enhances their social and communication skills. Needless to say, children who attend a nursery school are more likely to be extroverts with a sociable nature. Children can also learn the alphabets and numerals at kindergarten. This knowledge will give them an edge over other kids who start school at 5 or 6.
Conversely, if young children spend all of their time at home without going to a nursery school, they will find it rather difficult to keep pace with their peers when they start primary school. They will take weeks or even months to get used to the new environment and by then their peers will be way ahead of them.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some people think that children would benefit if they attended nursery school before primary school while others think that children should stay all day with their families Dis 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their peers will be way ahead of them.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, conversely, however, if, so, still, then, well, while, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60303030303 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38779610686 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8521775717 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356779869018 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120959980859 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827029785133 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248753125558 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066665823972 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.