You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to
visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend,
asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need
saying why you need them
making arrangements to meet
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad that you’re coming to Montreal next week, as it seems ages since we last saw each other. I
hope your family and girlfriend are all well. I actually have a favor to ask you, and I hope you don’t
mind. The fact is that I need a few things from my parents’ house, and I’d be so grateful if you could
bring them along in your suitcase.
The first thing is the book of maths calculations which I had at high school – don’t worry, it’s only a
small book. I need this because it has all the material I studied for my exams, and I can’t get another
copy here in any of the bookshops or on the Internet. The second thing is a packet of those biscuits
from the bakery in my old street. I’ve told everyone here how delicious they are, and my new friends
are very keen to try them!
I do hope that is manageable for you, as it won’t take up much space at all. In the meantime, I’m very
excited about seeing you again at the airport on Monday at midday. I’ll be in the arrivals hall, wearing
my blue jacket.
I can’t wait to see you then.
All the best,
Simon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
... ages since we last saw each other. I hope your family and girlfriend are all well...
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mind
...to ask you, and I hope you don't mind. The fact is that I need a few things f...
^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bring
... I'd be so grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase. The firs...
^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Small
... – don't worry, it's only a small book. I need this because it has all th...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Copy
...y exams, and I can't get another copy here in any of the bookshops or on the ...
^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...d thing is a packet of those biscuits from the bakery in my old street. I've ...
^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Are
...elicious they are, and my new friends are very keen to try them! I do hope that...
^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Excited
...t all. In the meantime, I'm very excited about seeing you again at the airport o...
^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 88, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arrivals'' or 'arrival's'?
Suggestion: arrivals'; arrival's
...n Monday at midday. I'll be in the arrivals hall, wearing my blue jacket. I can...
^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...s;ll be in the arrivals hall, wearing my blue jacket. I can't wait to see...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55140186916 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45412090308 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1987889417 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194615337178 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801698004808 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641211468589 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810410937396 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545962544261 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.