You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend,
asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need
saying why you need them
making arrangements to meet
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am so glad that you are coming to Toronto next week as it seems ages since we last saw each other. I hope you and your family are all well. Actually, I have favor to ask you, and I hope would not mind it. I need some things from my parents’ house. I would be great if you bring them along in your suitcase.
The first thing is the book of mathematics, which I had at my school because I have a mathematics course in my current semester, and in the book, all the topics are explained very clearly. Another thing I need is the packets of biscuits from Sandhu bakery. Here, I told everyone how delicious they are, and my friends are very keen to try them
I hope this would be manageable for you as it would not take your much space at all. In the meantime, I am very excited to see you at the airport on Monday. I’ll be in the arrival hall, wearing my blue jacket.
I can’t wait to see you then.
All the best,
Simon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eems ages since we last saw each other. I hope you and your family are all well. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, then, well, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1421319797 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17019176079 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604060913706 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8850844255 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7692307692 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285046834445 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106307565958 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642187127845 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163262878145 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825397005467 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.