You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from
a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the
University. In your letter,
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the noise pollution from the newly opened restaurant on the campus, especially during night hours. All the students are studying at that time and the loud music from that cafeteria is uneasy for everyone in the hostel.
Nightlife in the university campus was very calm and stable before the opening of this restaurant and everyone was able to study peacefully. The bad thing is the location is very near to the student hostel and the sounds of bikes and cars of people coming to the restaurant make it worse. Most of the scholars leave the evening hours for the study purpose but the distraction from this is not allowing people to concentrate on their course.
I would like to request you on behalf of all the students of the hostel to take some actions on them. We would suggest minimizing the sound level from the food court can act as an effective solution and the parking should be only for the university residency persons.
I hope you will understand our concerns and take some actions immediately.
Thank you in anticipation
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter regarding the n...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest minimizing'.
Suggestion: suggest minimizing
... some actions on them. We would like to suggest to minimize the sound level from the food court and...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y for the university residence persons. I hope you will understand our concerns ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50150261237 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6931365951 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151881936018 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632177952919 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547816945619 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835800875592 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283905932885 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.