Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Companies have been always benefited from having strong marketing and promotional strategies. Advertisement and sales play a supreme role in any organization to become fruitful. In my opinion, I completely agree that awareness about the product and offers on a product are pivotal to have a success story in the business.
Firstly, advertisement through television, radio, or any other source act as the way of communication from the company to their customers which make them aware about the product and it has a direct relationship with the success of the business. Spreading awareness about the item through pamphlets or commercials increase the selling double times as compare to unadvertised products in the market.
Secondly, sales have always been the point of attraction for the customers, especially during festival sessions. In carnival time, people often buy things for the family and for themselves. Providing the same product with lower price during the festival time attracts the customer and enforce him to buy in multiple numbers. For instance, festival time in Canada is Christmas and new year. During these days, often companies promote their products by offering them on sales, which tempted the customer and make them buy and eventually increase sale volume.
In conclusion, sales and marketing have always been significant indicators for any organization to know the growth and success. These two factors increase the development of the company by trading the products, which makes the organization more powerful in terms of economy and boost the business. Hence, the publicity and campaign are fundamental to any fruitful industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
Companies have been always benefited from having strong marketing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43023255814 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88129482424 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4228172535 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104097519517 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374280681765 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422509409025 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752770958946 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436531627885 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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