You are looking for a full-time job and recently you saw a job opening in an advertisement.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like to get
and say what experience and skills you have
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to the job posting in The Times Accent for the post of the Software Engineer. I have in total 4.5 yrs of professional experience. I am happy to discuss about this opportunity with you in person and can be available on weekdays from 10:00 am to 5:00 pm.
I am currently working with the Ericssion technology and it's been three years of a journey. My current roles and responsibilites are designing, planning, developing and unit testing the final software as the product become stable I do the refactoring of the code and make architecture more stringent to avail more requirements. I would be interested to become the part of your internal team where I can take parts in requirement gathering and giving client a demo with sample products.
If I will be selected, would it be possible for you to wait for 2 months as my notice period will be for 60 days and I am open to join office at any location in India. One of my friend is working with your organization from past 5 years, his name is Aman Singh(Emp ID: 5648623). I attaching my updated resume and can provide references on request.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-03 | Apoorva Chikara | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the Software Engineer. I have in total 4.5 yrs of professional experience. I am...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al 4.5 yrs of professional experience. I am happy to discuss about this opportun...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n weekdays from 10:00 am to 5:00 pm. I am currently working with the Ericssion...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing client a demo with sample products. If I will be selected, would it be possi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... his name is Aman SinghEmp ID: 5648623. I attaching my updated resume and can pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63594470046 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82026143787 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7819897082 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 4.34317383033 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137693700828 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466472692135 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502098582893 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909040699307 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448877727219 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.