You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to complain regarding the furniture in your King's street apartment. I have been an exhilarated tenant for 3 years and I would like to bring into your notice about some of the house fittings are incapacitated. I am requesting you to please replace them by the end of this month.
We are staying in your apartment from the january of 2016 and am thanking you to provide all the brand new amenities in first place when we moved. However, the sofa in the living room is no more comfortable because the cushions are out of their shape. Furthermore, the almirah in master bedroom broke its door due to the moisture in it and we tried to fix it temporarily. All the fittings in the kitchen are covered with a layer of oil and terminte so we need to install one chimney and need to get hand on termite experts to poison them.
Would it be possible to call the bug experts on this weekend? I would be able to pack my essentials thus they can apply medicine in the kitchen properly. You can raise the rent for the subsequent months left in the lease but we need new furniture by June.
I hope you will take action on it as you always do. Take care.
Your's Sincerely
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing this letter to complain reg...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ld like to bring into your notice about some of the house fittings are incapacitated. I am ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f the house fittings are incapacitated. I am requesting you to please replace the...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... apartment from the january of 2016 and am thanking you to provide all the brand n...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are. Yours Sincerely Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42290748899 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45117669484 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629955947137 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3682812232 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214461290356 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680641308506 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572421098045 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125118116407 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556391795073 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.