You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have rented a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom.
Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter
explain your situation
describe the problems with the house
say what you would like to
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the problems encountered while living at your downtown tower property. It's been six months we have been living in here and paying rent punctually. But there are a few problems associated with the kitchen, furnace, etc. Also, I would request you to look out for another tenant who can share the spare bedroom.
Initially, when we moved into the apartment all the kitchen wood compartments were in good shape but they are rotten from the bottom and need dire replacement. Furthermore, the winter are round the corner and the heating unit is incapacitated because of it our rooms are unable to maintain a warm temperature. However, we are using an auxillary room heaters which can work temporarily but we need to repair it as soon as possible.
Would it be possible to rent out the 4th room? It will help us to split more rent and make our stay economic. I can recommend one of my friends who is interested to move in next month. I am attaching the list of all items that need your attention for the renovation of the house.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Sincerely,
Apoorva Chikara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on for the renovation of the house. I am waiting to hearing from you soon. ...
^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Sincerely, Apoorva Chikara
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68115942029 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59746194588 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8563990393 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180084344101 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547927390316 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560569508906 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10861771083 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694842681767 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.