You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,introduce yourselfexplain what experience and special skills you havetell him/her when you think you could start

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You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.

Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,

introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start

Dear Sir,

My name is Paul Smith, a graduate student studying in St. Peters College, Mumbai. I saw an advertisement in the local newspaper about a volunteer required to work as a part-time in the football club.

I am writing to seek an opportunity for the part-time job at the football club during evening hours. I was a part of the football team in my school at state level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years representing my school in different tournaments. My special skill in football is defending and fitness training. As a result, I would like to train students in the club and also regulate myself into the game.

My summer vacations are starting from 1st August and I am willing like to start my job from the first day of my vacation.
I will be obliged if you accept my application and consider me for the said role.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Thanking you.

Yours faithfully,
Paul Smith

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the football club during evening hours. I was a part of the football team in my s...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years repres...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7100591716 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74338058607 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7171166551 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273674457563 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108309773739 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721870276391 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127303599825 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570669874301 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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