You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin and I have heard from my friend that youthpassion football club is looking for part-time trainer for the new session that will start next week. I am writing this letter to apply for the same.
I was a football lover since childhood and I have played football at state level under 18 group but due to some personal reasons, I could not continue my passion. Presently, I am a football coach at st. johns public school and I am training students from last five years. I also provide private coaching to batch of around twenty students and my students incredible performance in interstate and inter-college competitions make them win several trophies and awards. My passion and enthusiasm towards this game makes me feel energetic and the best trainer for this game.Through my guiding experience I have also learned many smart skills and tricks for this sports that are really helpful for beginners.
As you know that schools have been closed for summer vacations so I am quite free for next two months , I would like to work part-time as a football trainers at your club and would love to guide new students.
Thankyou for your time and consideration. Looking forward for a positive revert from you for this work opportunity.
Yours Sincerely
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin and I have heard from...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g this letter to apply for the same. I was a football lover since childhood an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a football lover since childhood and I have played football at state level unde...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Through
...etic and the best trainer for this game.Through my guiding experience I have also learn...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...earned many smart skills and tricks for this sports that are really helpful for begi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s so I am quite free for next two months , I would like to work part-time as a foo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is work opportunity. Yours Sincerely Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8963963964 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66674793927 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0517440207 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8181818182 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250262305315 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094839271895 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661522589967 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173551523972 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486365421716 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.