You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am writing you in response to the advertisement of part-time job in your football club published in DAWN newspaper last Sunday.
My name is Huma Mohiuddin and I am studying B.S Economics from University of Karachi. These days I am on a semester break so trying to search for a part-time job. I am very much fond of gardening which led me to attend a course of one year in Landscaping. Maintenance of grass on the football pitch would be my expertise which will be very helpful for your club. Since the ground would be very rough in this season, this would be best time to grow new one. The correct amount of water to be fed to the pitch will economize its use and the growth of new grass will add to aesthetics and probably would attract new members in the club. I would like to join as soon as I clear my interview.
Enclosed is my resume attached herewith the letter. I hope you will consider my application and am looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards
Huma Mohiuddin
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| 2019-10-11 | b.yousefi | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 78 | view |
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| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...e is Huma Mohiuddin and I am studying B.S Economics from University of Karachi. T...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...e very rough in this season, this would be best time to grow new one. The correct amoun...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...pe you will consider my application and am looking forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54347826087 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67936436189 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5803513674 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185606744799 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664711068362 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782263681659 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13721880973 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10755915547 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.