You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Anna Ala, 29 years of age. A single mother to a. 7-year-old boy and now I am jobless. I am writing this letter to ask if there is an available part-time job in any office work duties in the football club association.
For the past two years, I worked as a secretary in one of the prestigious law firms in town. One of my tasks was to see to it that the schedules of the clients are on time and I am responsible for letting them know of their next appointment. In addition to that, I do some computer typing, like making a memo or answer clients inquiries online. I am knowledgeable too with Microsoft word and excel. Lastly, I can fluently speak, read and write in English.
I am really in need of a job to suffice our daily expenses. If there is an available job, surely I can start immediately. My résumé is attached further assessment.
I hope for a positive response to my inquiry. I will be more than happy to receive a call or a message at your most convenient time.
Faithfully yours,
Anna Ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Anna Ala, 29 years of age. A single...
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...ties in the football club association. For the past two years, I worked as a se...
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...ntly speak, read and write in English. I am really in need of a job to suffice ...
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...résumé is attached further assessment. I hope for a positive response to my inq...
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...st convenient time. Faithfully yours, Anna Ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, really, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35751295337 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77042712413 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5825175551 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106550572392 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277247838973 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463561792419 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064622110819 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319768330137 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.