Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to apologize for the two days disturbance due to the loud noise at our house that I and my classmates created. We did not notice that it was already inappropriate to increase the volume of our music.
Our group was practicing for an upcoming contest that will be held on December 8, 2018, at our school. Since we do not have enough budget to rent a studio, we decided to practice at our house. In addition, the second day was intense because my parents only allowed us limited time to use the garage as our place to do our rehearsal.
Again, we are very sorry for the inconvenience that we have caused to the neighborhood. Next time, we will tone down the volume of our stereo and we will put egg crates on the wall. In that way, the sound will just be contained inside our premises. We promise that we will not make disturbing sounds again.
Sincerely yours,
Anna ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e to increase the volume of our music. Our group was practicing for an upcoming...
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...rage as our place to do our rehearsal. Again, we are very sorry for the inconve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44311377246 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48160069283 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5214856473 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556519063139 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256587132494 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197086255769 0.0603063233224 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426092796158 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111935957248 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.