You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
My name is Paul Smith, a graduate student studying in St. Peters College, Mumbai.
I am writing to seek a part-time job at the football club during evening hours. I was a part of the football team in my school at state level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years representing my school in different tournaments. My special skill in football is defending and fitness training. As a result, I would like to train students in the club and also regulate myself into the game.
My summer vacations are starting from 1st August and I am willing like to start my job from the first day of my vacation.
I will be obliged if you accept my application and consider me for the said role.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te level and have won many tournaments. I have played football for 5 years repres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69655172414 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62382752254 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662068965517 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8027582751 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247671109119 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105748412884 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748559817345 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107181453251 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760103820834 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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