You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer.
-introduce yourself
-explain what type of job you like
-explain your previous experiences and related skills
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you here to express my interest to join you company for summer openings.
I am shahla, a senior year student from University of Oklahoma. Currently I am residing in the south side of the city.
As I am studying in department of Mass communication, I would prefer to work in the communication department, if possible. Assisting communication officer, co-ordinating with press and updating social media contents are some of the tasks I enjoy. I am
I may mention that I have worked as press and media co-ordinator at Toronto Internatioanal Film Festival for last two years. Not only in organizing press kit, but you can also relay on me to maintain the social media platforms. I am also comfortable using photo editing and video editing softwares like photoshop, final cut pro etc.
Please keep be informed if any opportunity arises in your company.
Yours faithfully,
shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nts are some of the tasks I enjoy. I am I may mention that I have worked as pres...
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...wares like photoshop, final cut pro etc. Please keep be informed if any opportuni...
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...any opportunity arises in your company. Yours faithfully, shahla
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... in your company. Yours faithfully, shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13245033113 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11753867822 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715231788079 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.548323356 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105122320105 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379107396455 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537285231668 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600848856143 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785282814259 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 7.59969072165 128% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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