You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir/Ma,
I write to express my discontentment with your recent 'Super Lunch Combo' meals. I represent a group, the boys' band, which meet at Fast Lunch Restaurant weekly. Over the past few weeks, your new super lunch combo servings have been unsatisfactory.
I have noticed that after the first month of launch, the combo meals have reduced in quantity and quality. The chicken wings are smaller and the noodles are always served soggy - like it was made in a hurry. On our last visit, we pointed this out to the waitress with the name Peace on her tag, and she responded saying "that is just the way it is". I found the reply totally unacceptable as we deserved a better response.
You would lose customers like members of my group if nothing is done. With regard to this, you should properly educate your staff with a pletora of good responses for customers. This could help pacify angry customers. Further more, quality control should be done on every meal before it is served.
Thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Odunayo Adekoya.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92817679558 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56048672314 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.729281767956 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6829850961 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6153846154 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9230769231 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141359752144 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499178279946 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492110616484 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960556946991 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531139712665 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.