you are not satisfied with the changing rooms in a sports centre that you visit.
Write a letter to the sports centre manager. In your letter.
explain the problem
say how you feel about the problem
and say what steps you would like the manager to take
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to complain about the unacceptable condition of the male changing rooms at the Bannatyne's sports centre.
i have bee using the gym at your centre from several years now, and it appears like no maintenance work have been carried out in changing room facilities since i am visiting this place. As a result paint is peeling off from the walls, floor tiles are getting cracked, and there is mould and mildew growing around the showers.
The neglected and shabby state of the changing rooms make me feel that you do not care about your customers. I feel that we are being treated like farm animals, and i worry that you are putting our health on risk. It seems that profit is more important for you than customer satisfaction.
I would like to request you to please solve the changing room issue as a matter of urgency. I suggest that a full refurbishment of the area is required so that members can use these facilities with ease and comfort. We are tolerating this situation from a long time and your urgent attention is required to renovate changing rooms as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...oms at the Bannatynes sports centre. i have bee using the gym at your centre f...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d out in changing room facilities since i am visiting this place. As a result pai...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re being treated like farm animals, and i worry that you are putting our health o...
^
Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omfort. We are tolerating this situation from a long time and your urgent attenti...
^^
Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssible. Yours faithfully, John Smith
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, i feel, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73762376238 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53109763729 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4123743425 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286631928975 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101060244641 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728608289345 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152557746851 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689208416606 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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