You are panning a holiday to Scotland. You have been given the name and address of a hotel near the sea and would like further information.write a letter to the hotel. Ask for information about hotel’s exact location and facilities. Ask about the availa

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You are panning a holiday to Scotland. You have been given the name and address of a hotel near the sea and would like further information.
write a letter to the hotel. Ask for information about hotel’s exact location and facilities. Ask about the availability of the rooms. Explain any special requirements you have and ask whether the hotel can accommodate them. .

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire more information about your hotel.
Firstly, please let me know the exact hotel's location. Is this the former Columbus hotel, between the laundry and the convenience store? Furthermore, it is argued by some that your restaurant closes late at night. As I will be in leisure activities until 10 pm, could you tell me what time the restaurant terminate its activities?
Secondly, I would like to know the availability of rooms with sight for the sea in July. I will need four double rooms, with air conditioning and minibar. Some of the best accommodations would be amazing for us.
Finally, my uncle Jorge has special needs. It is difficult for him to climb stairs. Can you tell me if elevators and other facilities for disabled people such as ramps and handrail are widely available in the hotel?
I would appreciate your time and attention to these questions. Thank you for your kindness.

Yours faithfully,
Anna chandler

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hotels'' or 'hotel's'?
Suggestion: hotels'; hotel's
... Firstly, please let me know the exact hotels location. Is this the former Columbus h...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed people such as ramps and handrail are widely available in the hotel? I would ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7500997561 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715151515152 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1768009604 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2857142857 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7857142857 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209941736485 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632517807336 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544963350284 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118945743141 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396524830423 0.0580467560999 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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