You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
explain what you like bout the cafeteria
say what is wrong
suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to make a few suggestions about the college cafeteria meals.
I really appreciate having lunch at the canteen because I purchase healthy products in a clean environment. Moreover, all the employees perform their occupation with sympathy so they make me feel welcome there.
Nevertheless, I can not eat at the cafeteria anymore since there was discovered that I have food allergy. It has been a challenge for me to avoid certain types of nut and other products. Unfortunately, the refectory does not have foods label carefully as well as personalized menus for allergic consumers.
I would be grateful if the nutrition staff could take the right approach and create customized meal plan with high quality control. Furthermore, it is crucial that food is not prepared on surfaces or in pans that contained any of the potential allergen ingredients. I safely assume that there are others with the same medical condition.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your kindness and attention.
Yours faithfully,
Anna Chandler
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14204545455 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90642078277 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6809994243 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139237664482 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488991852296 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549368633616 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756143956571 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665985420228 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.