Dear Sir,
I am John, from the band of brothers and i am writing to express my disappointment after receiving the letter from the community, that we will no longer be able to use the hall for rehearsals. I would request you to change the timings and days instead of cancelling the practice completely.
Let me explain our situation, we are a music group focusing on the betterment of community through spreading messages of peace and harmony through music. We do a lot of charity events thereby raising funds for the Springfield community. Our group has won awards from the local government for our contribution in the fight against drugs. As you know, Music has healing properties and it calms the senses. Music helps to rehabilitate people struggling with addiction to drugs.
However, if we are not supported by our community it will be difficult for us to continue the good work that we are doing for the service of humanity. I understand that there is some noise while playing music and it hinders with the evening mass at church opposite the building. Hence, I would request you to swap the timings and days instead of cancelling altogether. We are ok to practice on Monday's and Wednesday's instead of Tuesday and Friday evenings at the community hall.
Look forward to hearing a positive reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... am John, from the band of brothers and i am writing to express my disappointment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86893203883 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75482336067 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4882195798 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215497856866 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670294277874 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585993353796 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106380333632 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712826155264 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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