You are renting a new apartment, but your family situation has changed recently. Write a letter to the real estate agent asking them to find a new accommodation, more suitable for your needs.
In your letter explain – your current family situation. What type of new accommodation do you require?
When do you need to move?
Dear Sir,
I am one of your customers that I have got the apartment six month back. I am writing this letter to looking for a spacious apartment which one is near to my area.
Currently, I am staying with my family that overall 5 members including my parents. My brother is working in Hyderabad and he is planning to relocate to our city with his wife in order to this we felt that current staying apartment which is not suitable for 7 members. So we are looking for 3 BK apartment which one is 1400 square feet. The apartment should be available 3 bedrooms with attaching restroom also we are expecting 1 balcony that my daughter has to spend some time over there.
However, we are planning to shift next month due to that I will request you to please find the accommodation which one is suitable for the abovementioned requirement.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...omers that I have got the apartment six month back. I am writing this letter to looki...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'apartments'.
Suggestion: apartments
...r 7 members. So we are looking for 3 BK apartment which one is 1400 square feet. The apar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67901234568 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70840675571 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9360200829 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2222222222 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130287387028 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646326602977 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053952617412 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670626605087 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352705297908 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.