Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Though, some people think that retirement plan should be at the age of 65 for everyone. While others claim that retirement plan cannot be an age limitation but however this discussion outweighed by an earlier age plan. In this essay, I am going to discuss what should be the best age limitation for everyone.
On the one hand, some people are doing regular exercises and they are concern about their health always. These people can able to do their work without having a retirement plan. Some people, they want to earn lots of money until their breath to stop it, those are always thinking about business and they don't consider about their Sarene life. I believe that whoever is doing white collar jobs, this type of work never be hard and also safety as well. They can relax and do their job peacefully at any time without any hesitation.
On the other hand, most of them are working as a blue collar jobs and pink collar jobs. It is very laborious to manage their work in order to lift heavyweight types of equipment and mental and physical stress work. Some of them, they are not spending time with families due to fabricating more money. every day spends around 15 to 18 hours work between the age of 30 to 45. They can not continue their same work after 60. For instance, my uncle used to work around 18 hours per day and he has developed his business across all the continents and even succeed but after the age of 60, he was inadequate to do the same thing with the same spirit.
To sum up this, a retirement plan cannot be exceeded more than 60, people want to spend some time with their families and they can responsibilities to take care of their granddaughter or grandson education and enjoy their clement life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...rement plan cannot be an age limitation but however this discussion outweighed by an earlie...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...and they are concern about their health always. These people can able to do their work...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...always thinking about business and they dont consider about their Sarene life. I bel...
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Line 6, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
...families due to fabricating more money. every day spends around 15 to 18 hours work b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5641025641 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33558640165 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6556950597 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267415334081 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100946952439 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689801458728 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158253064527 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664189038517 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.