Throughout history, people have always been working hard every day for making a better life for their families, accordingly retirement age has become a controversial debate between people. Some believe that everyone has to work until age 65 and the others say that it is unfair for some career which categories as difficult or dangerous jobs and I agree with that person in a rough job could retire earlier than others.
Above all, work to age 65 could be beneficial for many people and organizations in society. For example, people who are working in offices or work in low-risk jobs like teaches, accounts or bank employees could occupy until they reach stopping work age and will be paying monthly by governments and companies.
In addition, many people who have low pay careers willingly continue their work to get retire from their jobs because they need money for their children. For instance, labor on factories, plumber or house painter needs to work long hours in a day to provide their families' needs.
Although all people need attention after their post-working years, some careers should be getting special benefit from early retirement age like people have a high-risk position in
society and they put their lives always in serious danger to do their jobs. As an illustration, firefighters, the mind works, diverse or even soldiers' everyday face to a dangerous situation and maybe they lose their lives or some parts of their bodies like arms or legs so that they should be retirement earlier and deserve to get a pension more than others.
In conclusion, in my opinion, people with hard work should be appreciated by their employees and governments when they want to retire earlier and others should retire depend on their jobs in communities regardless of their age.
- The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:say why he/she would not enjoy going to collegeexplain wh 73
- Some say that people living in high rise apartments are lonely and unhappy while others say that it s advantageous to stay in high rise apartments Discuss both views and give your opinion 92
- It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Fossil fuel is the main source of energy In some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, so, as to, even so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04697986577 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5917165605 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3014895822 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.111111111 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310242749363 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151626398401 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550462551456 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176634477491 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625839993057 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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