You are renting a new apartment, but your family situation has changed recently. Write a letter to the real estate agency asking them to find a new accommodation, more suitable for your needs.
In your letter explain – your current family situation. What type of new accommodation do you require?
When do you need to move?
Dear Mr Barnes,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to find new accommodation due to changes in my family situation.
As you are aware that I am living in a studio apartment in the centre of the city. The apartment does not have sufficient space to host guests moreover my parents will be moving in too so I am looking for a spacious apartment.
The apartment should be a two-bedroom located in the suburbs of the city as my parents like to stay in a peaceful locality which offers peace and tranquillity. To elucidate the locality should have all the modern amenities like supermarket, security, swimming pool, Gymnasium moreover it should also be well-connected to the city via public transport.
For the existing apartment, the tenancy agreement will expire by the end of this month so I am planning to get the paperwork done by then for the new apartment and move in by the beginning of the next month.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Yours faithfully
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to changes in my family situation. As you are aware that I am living in a stu...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l be moving in too so I am looking for a spacious apartment. The apartment sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7816091954 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87409190539 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8279774994 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155249378811 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079184868554 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787236594195 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091639759019 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072545778441 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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