Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your kind notice that your flat wherein me and my friends are putting up at, needs lot of repair.
Firstly, there is no proper electricity supply or backup facility in your flat. Every second day, electricity is put off for a couple of hours which creates a hindrance in my studies. The supply is usually not there in evenings. Another obstacle is that the geyser in the bathroom is not in working condition from the time I have rented the flat. In this bitter cold we are making our own temporary arrangement for hot water. I feel pathetic about all these things. Moreover, I am unable to devote time in studies because every other day I am arranging for some or other workmen, but all in vain. They promise to come on weekends but never turn up.
I would like you to personally visit your flat along with some efficient workmen. Failing if, I would be deducting a certain amount of rent and would be giving a lesser amount as all these expenses were included in the rent agreement duly signed. My last resort would be to vacate the premises if things are not improved.
Looking forward for you visit.
Yours sincerely,
Nick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60093896714 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36089091292 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7270047953 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156538055616 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492602595255 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572172648184 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920605860652 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425044088784 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.