You are a student at an English language school and are living in private accommodation with other students from the school. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord.
In your letter
State you reason for writing
Describe the problem
Propose a solution
Dear Mr. Eills,
I am writing on behalf of all the students at your property at 38 New Street.
As you know that we have not had hot water and heating system for last two months. We appreciate that you sent the workmen to rectify the situation, but the fact is that they have not been successful, despite spending a lot of time on the problems.
Up to now, the focus has been on repairing the hot water boiler and heating system. However, both of these are quite old. Therefore, we think that boiler and heating system need to be replaced, rather than relying on repairs that do not work or may only keep them in working condition for a limited time.
One of us has a friend who works part-time for plumbing company. His friend and colleagues have taken a look at the problem and the problem and they have provided us with a quote for the necessary work. The price seems very reasonable and they are sure that they can get the work done by the end of this week.
We hope that you will agree to this solution as we enjoy living here and we think that you want to be as helpful as possible.
Yours sincerely
Ntp
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
.... As you know that we have not had hot water and heating system for last two months....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30805687204 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19825528952 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616113744076 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9495258036 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238298242987 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825000457355 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748103944663 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122409554196 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616912174404 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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