You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the

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You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter:

• explain the reason for the party

• give the date and time of the party

• suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________

Dear Jack,

How’re you buddy? Actually, through this letter I would like to invite you on my friend’s surprise birthday party.

As you know Renu, she is very intelligent girl of our class. But now these days, she seems depressed because of her mother’s illness and miss her mother very much. But before the exams she is not able to get back to home. Hence, I would like to through a party to make her rejuvenate.

I know many of our classmates are from overseas and not aware about the area of our city Patiala. Owing to this, birthday party is organized at our English language school on 10 November and it starts at morning time at 10 o’clock.

I already took permission from our class in charge to celebrate her birthday in our class. Moreover, I suggest bringing decoration material such as balloons, artificial flowers to make our classroom beautiful. See you at 10 November at 8 o’clock at our class to make all the arrangements. I am eagerly waiting to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Aman

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... eagerly waiting to hearing from you. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from you. Best regards, Aman
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, moreover, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90449438202 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81444414072 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6281440315 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6923076923 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199279912201 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678374900154 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537560032019 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129460146025 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399365748871 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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