Dear Will,
I am writing to you about the possibility of taking a fortnight off work in order to complete my Masters' degree in People Management. I have been pursuing the course from past two years and have to appear for the final semester next month. I almost finished my preparation for the finals but would require a complete 3 days to end up the syllabus of the course.
Unfortunately, all my annual leave has been used up and anytime I took off, would naturally be unpaid. Over the off time, I would be connected over email and phone calls whenever my assistance is needed. On return, I would endeavor to come into office earlier than normal time and work on the weekends to cope up with the work I missed. I have already had a word with Mr. Lee and Mr. Adams who both have agreed to take up responsibilities in my absence.
I realize that my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the company and to the rest of the team, but in the long term, I am sure that company will also be gaining a benefit with my degree. As you aware that most of our clients require people management software, my degree would be an asset in developing it in a more efficient way.
Looking to hearing from you,
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pear for the final semester next month. I almost finished my preparation for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4845814978 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61090436355 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3406281778 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221067799481 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894921397838 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536926067784 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127764614607 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517364383653 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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