You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Dave,
I am writing this letter t ask for few weeks off to complete my certification.
I have registered for CFA level one certification and I am already taking coaching for this. Since there are only three weeks left for the exam, my coaching centre is providing a full day session from now on for the exam preparation. Hence, I need a three weeks off my work in order to complete this session.
I will delegate all the pending assignments to my team members so that there is no hampering of wok. Once I join office later, I can have knowledge transfer session from my colleagues to get familiar with the new assignments. Also, I will set up a meeting with the client to understand the requirements, that will help me getting pace in work.
This CFA certification is to enhance my knowledge in the financial sector. Since I am working on the capital market domain, this certification will help in increasing my functional skills. It will not only improve my knowledge, but it will also be helpful for the company's growth.
I hope that you will understand my point and provide me the required time off.
Yours sincerely,
ABC
- Your local hospital has advertised people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.Write a letter to the hospital. In your letterexplain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospita 81
- You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved.Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your areasay what is wrong 84
- The television is good for you Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching television Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- In what ways has information technology changed work and working practices in the past 10 years 36
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know: when you will be arriving and leavingwhat type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will costinqu 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...and the requirements, that will help me getting pace in work. This CFA certification...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72139303483 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84119243385 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606965174129 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3428015022 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210469242467 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823119762555 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670624192892 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137024812168 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725529394602 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.