You are studying for qualification and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. Write-
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off
Say how the qualification helps your job or company
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your kind approval for getting a time-off work for a certain period of time.
As you know, I am in the Application Design and Testing department in this company, my core duties revolve around measuring the performance of the applications which are designed by my seniors working as the developers. Although I love my job, that you already know by going through my past work records, I have recently realized that I bear the potential to do much better than this. I am creative in nature and my suggestions towards the designing of the application software are always welcomed by the developers above me. What I am trying to say here is that, I am just one step away from working my dream as a developer myself. And that step is a Diploma in Application Design.
It is a humble request to you to grant me a leave period of two months, so that I can acquire this particular qualification and upgrade my career. Believe me when I say this, it will be a correct thing to do for both of us, as it will be a give me a career boost and ti will provide you with a talented resource. You have already seen me working at designing , therefore you can imagine what I can see in future for both of us.
If you agree to this for me, I promise you that I would not take any incentive for the first ten applications that I am going to design after the course, neither will I demand any royalty or credit for them. I can assure you that this is a profitable decision to make and it will also steer the organisation towards new heights.
I hope you understand my sentiments towards my goal to edify myself and this company and I would wait for an optimistic revert from you.
Yours sincerely,
Darpan Aneja.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-07 | vinshu koul | 78 | view |
| 2019-04-17 | leoWriter | 61 | view |
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Comments
why did I get such a low band
why did I get such a low band score?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...r getting a time-off work for a certain period of time. As you know, I am in the Applicatio...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ave already seen me working at designing , therefore you can imagine what I can se...
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Line 14, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you. Yours sincerely, Darpan Aneja.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 71.0 32.9175257732 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 324.0 206.0 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41049382716 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61848865574 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0778498526 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308883384919 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111019305976 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858686561594 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163981265225 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100196546811 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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