Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. My name is Damon Salvatore, and I have been working as a Senior Analyst at your organization since 2016. I am inscribing this epistle to seek some days off from you to appear in my final certification examination of Oracle. Indubitably, you have always extended your helped hand towards every employee. thus I aspire to the same gesture from you.
Even though I have just completed quarterly work, still I assure you that my absence from work would not be hampered as I would endow my services while working from home. Gladly, the financial year has initially commenced, therefore, I would achieve all my pending targets without impeding the productivity after my arrival.
Since our firm has been expanded overseas, Oracle certification would equip me with versatile traits to handle our new operations with our foreign clients. Moreover, this expansion would entitle me to the new strategies which would be accountable for the surge in the staked of our enterprises.
I promise that I would utilize this opportunity productively to attain this certification.
Yours sincerely,
Damon
- Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
- Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy What other things in life can make people happy 67
- Most employers do job interviews before offering a position to a person Do you think this is the best way to choose an employee or are there better alternatives What is the best method of choosing employees in your opinion 61
- Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several davs say you are sorry explain the situation with transportation give suggestions of how you intend to fix it 73
- You are a member of a sports club Write a letter to the club president about an event that will be organized there In your letter you should tell What it is Inter Zonal Sports competition Who you will invite Sports Minister What your role is in this event 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...our helped hand towards every employee. thus I aspire to the same gesture from you. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...our helped hand towards every employee. thus I aspire to the same gesture from you. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90227102169 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671875 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5743876353 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245760108222 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898485321889 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566505076133 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117768948277 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104486400665 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.