You are unable to attend a farewell party of a colleague at work. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should:
-say why you can’t come
-give him/her your best wishes.
-suggest another time and place for you to meet.
Dear Rose,
I hope you are doing well by the grace of Almighty. Also, I'm happy to hear about your promotion in another company. However, I'm writing today to express my absence on your farewell party at Lizzy's Restaurant on the coming Friday.
I'll be travelling a day before Friday to London for a business meeting with our new client which is Range Rover. The appointment was already scheduled a past three-weeks, and the same cannot be adjusted because it is only chance to win them as our new client which will give us enormous amounts of profit in the next business quarter as they are launching a new electric vehicle in the coming two months.
I wish you all the best for your brighter future ahead and great challenges which will you accomplish with your work , passion, and dedication.
After coming back from London, I'll schedule a meetup with you in the next week at Rico's Bar around 7pm on Wednesday. Besides, it would be a great fun to spend time at our favorite bar.
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Warm Regards,
Shwatank
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- Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages What do you think about work life balance 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ng well by the grace of Almighty. Also, Im happy to hear about your promotion in a...
^^
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... promotion in another company. However, Im writing today to express my absence on ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ys Restaurant on the coming Friday. Ill be travelling a day before Friday to Lo...
^^^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...which will you accomplish with your work , passion, and dedication. After comi...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...t our favorite bar. Looking forward to meet you soon. Warm Regards, Shwatank ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73513513514 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42085974701 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7546562084 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270316892117 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102178521724 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844043158546 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166567273015 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880031640894 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.