Dear Simon,
Warm greetings! This letter is written to seek an apology for inability to attend your farewell party that is being organised at Park Plaza Hotel next weekend.
Unfortunately, my cousin’s marriage is on the same day. Therefore, I have to go to Banglore to attend the marriage, and flight tickets have been booked. He assigned me several tasks to look after during marriage ceremony. It is not feasible to be absent from a family event.
Regarding working together, it has been a marvellous experience while working. Your passion, commitment and honestly always inspire young employees, and numerous things can be learned from you such as teamwork, respecting thoughts of your subordinates. For me, you comprise all qualities that are needed for a perfect employee. I hope you would have a prosperous future ahead
Kindly again accept my apologies for being absent in your farewell party.
Warm regards,
Benjamin Stokes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you would have a prosperous future ahead Kindly again accept my apologies for bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, look, regarding, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29801324503 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76148617337 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.748344370861 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0638927417 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219210252878 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644377881612 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703084520793 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120948868738 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792952250628 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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