You are unhappy about a plan to make you local airport bigger and increase number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
-explain where you live
-describe the problem
-give the reason why you do not want this development
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about making local airport bigger. I acknowledge that this improvement is needed to achieve better connectivity and will bring more revenue for local community. However, growth of the airport will actually bring more problems for surrounding residents.
I am living in community merely 5 blocks from the airport. There are other communities which are even closer than that. If this project goes as planned, some of the roads connecting communities will be either blocked or utilized to make space for airport parking. Not to mention, noise pollution from increasing number of flights, we are already suffering from constant take off/landing noise and some of the new runways are planned very close to community just outside the airport. Our local noise decibel meters have recorded 70s, 80s, and even 90s decibels of aircraft noise and can you imagine this going upwards as the air traffic increases ?
Although I understand need for growth, I, as a local resident would like oppose the idea of expansion of the airport for sake of all the families living nearby.
Sincerely,
Beth Adams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rom constant take off/landing noise and some of the new runways are planned very close to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23404255319 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70475445263 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0953652274 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208246373522 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697405291553 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508241360042 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125443666059 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025565881066 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.