You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a restaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say
- What problem do you experience?
- What should the management do about it?
- Describe what you will do if the problem is not resolved.
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the noise of your restaurant that disturbed my peace since you have lunched.
To begin with, I should say that I am a student of PhD degree and most of the time I have to do research or analysis my test results. I mean I have to concentrate and this need me to be relaxed in a silent atmosphere. The noise that is made by your staff and your costumer is as loud and annoying that I am not able to focus on my activities. Most of the time, I can hear all the conversation of your outdoor tables’ customers which distract me from what I am doing.
To rectify this situation, I think, you must impose some restrict rules to mitigate the noise pollution of your restaurant. To illustrate, your staff have to speak as low as possible. Also, the number of outdoor tables should be reduced. Besides, if you do not want to decline the number of tables, you can provide me with some anti-noise windows and doors to address this situation.
I hope this problem will receive your immediate attention, otherwise I have to make a claim and ask the court to solve this problem which can result in a high fine of your restaurant.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime and consideration. Yours Sincerely, Yalda Asgari.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, i mean, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55652173913 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71787473961 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55652173913 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1702014291 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182860343339 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619178833514 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529804914694 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107099955279 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332311904701 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.