Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writting with reguard to inquire some information about our journey with my family ,which we are planning for next month ,for a short time. Almost about 15 days.
Actually, we have planned to stay in Murree approximately 15 to 20 days - 1st September till 15th September. According to my plan, I need to discuss some important points about the hotels, food ,transport and events too. Could you help me telling about the transport facility also? and what will be the charge of the rooms, with meals and without meals. Kindly inform me about which dishes are famous there.
I need some suggestions ,about if there will be any events happening during our stay. So we can enjoy our holidays better. Also tell me if there are kid's enjoyment places as well as for adults. My family is also fond of seeing the local events ,they want to know the culture.
I need this information before the first of September. You can give me this information thhrough my E-mail or fax or you can contact me on my personal number too.
Feel free to ask any kind of information you want to know.
Yours faithfully,
Tayyaba
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, so, well, as for, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43352963082 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4590485644 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199511534186 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595790625907 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518915028068 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115326417833 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404836576487 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.