You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letterExplain why you want to take time off work.Give details of the amount of time you needSuggest how you

Dear Manager,
I am writing to ask permission on leaves regarding the preparation of my final exams. As you know 3 months back I applied an exam called MOH, its final date has released yesterday, and the test will be on March 25th, so I have to hardly prepare for my future ambition. For me, this test is mandatory to pass to go Dubai.

For my preparation, I require one and of month duration, but for me 25 days enough to complete my hard work. I will be happy if you sanction leaves that what I expected and I shall come back as soon as completed my test.

No need to worry about my absent at work meanwhile I shall do my task from home while finishing day by day work I will send my task along with my friend even he has been staying nearby my home and also he too member of our staff. I would be grateful if you sanction my leaves
I look forward to receiving your response
Thank you Sir,
Yours sincerely,
A. Siva Sankar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be grateful if you sanction my leaves I look forward to receiving your respons...
^^^
Line 10, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u Sir, Yours sincerely, A. Siva Sankar
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22777777778 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35059094225 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0613719413 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171236849461 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767247034058 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066897226057 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896772810644 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0076911131143 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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