You are working for a Company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to have your attention about my absence next week. Let me explain in detail.
Yesterday, I get a news that my grandmother was in hospital because she have a heart attack and there was nobody to take care of my grandmother. Therefore, I want to have some days off and want to get your permission.
I have not take my days off in this year so I hope I can absent at least 1 week due to my grandma’s serious diase. I will finish my work before next week and my workload is not too much so Ms Lisa will take on my position temporily and aid me to do my work.
I will take the responsibility of my absence and promise to do well in my job. I hope you will accept my letter soon.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...xplain in detail. Yesterday, I get a news that my grandmother was in hospital bec...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...grandmother was in hospital because she have a heart attack and there was nobody to ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...to get your permission. I have not take my days off in this year so I hope I ca...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mporily and aid me to do my work. I will take the responsibility of my abse...
^
Line 17, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sence and promise to do well in my job. I hope you will accept my letter soon. ...
^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pe you will accept my letter soon. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35064935065 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55048535458 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.232395261 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199066205971 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957670542061 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611309038334 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109521659322 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218079981609 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.02 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.