You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your lett

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for th...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nglish Newspaper. I am lisa and I am an junior at Economic University and my ma...
^^
Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...c University and my major is marketing. I want to have a part time job to reduce ...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...my major is marketing. I want to have a part time job to reduce my family's finance ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reduce my family's finance burden. I am into study about history and ancient...
^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d ancient things so when I see the job, i am really feel excitied so I hope my ap...
^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...ings so when I see the job, i am really feel excitied so I hope my application will ...
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Line 5, column 295, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I hope my application will be accepted. I had 1 year experience working for a clo...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lisa
...looking forward to hearing from you. lisa
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, i think, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 570.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65429508135 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639097744361 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.576031259 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238504409365 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110857561339 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803341690861 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201850022199 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105805706961 0.0580467560999 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.