You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter
-explain why want to take time off work
-give details of the amount of time you need
-suggest how you work could be covered while you are away
Dear Manager,
I am writing in regards to request of my unpaid leave for next month.
My brother is getting married soon and the celebration of marriage will be held on 1st of March 2016, which is next two weeks, at Malaysia. As a part of the family member, participation is required because it is really important to our family. Therefore, I will not be able to come to company as I have to have some gift preparation for my brother and his lovely future wife.
I have done most of job tasks for next week before I left Australia. As Katie has the same position as I do in the company, therefore she will be the one who takes over my position while I am away. I will not be coming to company, from Monday 21st to Sunday 27th and will be back on 3rd of March which is Thursday.
I would be grateful that if you could allow me this time. This are very important to my family and me. Thank you in advance.
Your Sincerely,
Edison
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Manager, I am writing in regards to request of my unpaid leave for next mon...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...l that if you could allow me this time. This are very important to my family and me....
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192893401015 0.220444632235 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.167512690355 0.167888034529 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0609137055838 0.0606518309736 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456852791878 0.0506257000042 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.116751269036 0.118615021944 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137055837563 0.107062808482 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0355329949239 0.041066498444 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38901128626 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0406091370558 0.0385302599488 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0456852791878 0.0714148451538 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0355329949239 0.0191574576366 185% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152284263959 0.00930345855455 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 940.0 1141.60824742 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.134020619 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25139664804 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.245810055866 0.284621296913 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.173184357542 0.211203875043 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.111731843575 0.133321485273 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0614525139665 0.0843313296314 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38901128626 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.9453308888 62.8969750728 95% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2727272727 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1104137136 44.7399317507 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 90.9928171075 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.4300151701 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 7.22680412371 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Readability: 33.5911630269 37.5504026743 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.10769230769 1.13073093955 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262741131101 0.331212695627 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.087735423592 0.0927372745006 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701630931331 0.0736520305886 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.672218405488 0.662452444078 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.239045810604 0.233577193048 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109528364849 0.122183219658 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042828293321 0.0765303033291 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.110550738971 0.110270004696 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.145963792707 0.120535355502 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12125037106 0.120397337282 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656230106539 0.113578534861 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.54639175258 88% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.62886597938 114% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.25773195876 85% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.0 Out of 9