Dear Ms. Snyder,
I am writing this to ask you to kindly grant me three days of unpaid leave for a vacation with my family. It has been more than a year and a half since I have been on a holiday and this time, I had promised my wife for a trip to Paris.
Let me provide you more detail. Based on my current itinerary, I would be unavailable to work from 22nd March until 24th March, Friday. Currently, I haven't booked my air tickets as I needed a confirmation from your end.
During my absence, Anne would be handling my clients. There are only two meetings scheduled during the above time frame and I will also make sure to provide you the report on my current project before I leave. Moreover, I will have access to my mails and will be available through phone, if required.
I hope you to accept my travel plans.
Yours sincerely,
Maheem Bhatia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... until 24th March, Friday. Currently, I havent booked my air tickets as I needed a con...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40625 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3630538372 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3463103469 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179190501857 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737079528757 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433707803879 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10623317104 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335558274099 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.