You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write a letter to a former teacher In your letter give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference

Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to ask if you would kindly write me a reference letter. The job that I am applying for is in telecommunication domain. To be precise, I hope to work as a data analyst for their big data platform.
Let me explain in more detail. I know that we have worked together in finance sector, but I would appreciate if you could include information about my character. You could also describe my dedication and hardworking skill set along with my amicable personality, for example. Moreover, you could also include my problem solving and critical thinking mind set. If you remember, I have great expertise in the latest analyst tools.
I know its too much to ask for, but would you be able to deliver me this letter by the end of this week? The position needs to be filled within two weeks as it an urgent hiring. I would really appreciate if you could provide me with the same as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,
Maheem Bhatia

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, really, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60109289617 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71772098378 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3692696848 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7692307692 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286215841987 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917445282226 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521961124293 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153519815763 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491057941845 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.