You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement
Dear marry,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you in good health, I am still relishing the pleasant time we had together on my last visit to England and I was counting the days of my upcoming planned visit in March at your place.
But surprisingly, the important day of my life is finally here, my beloved younger sister is going to get married and be adjusted to her new home. I am very excited and happy for hir. Moreover, as you know I am her only, sister after all and there are so many arrangements that I have to take responsibility for.
so, for the reason mentioned above, I will not be able to make this visit on the planned date. I had to shift the schedule from february to april. I would first like to sincerely apologise for the inconvenience that I caused.
Further to this, please adjust your leave plan from february to mid of april april. As I have also changed my ticket from 17 february an confirmed to 15 april.
my apologise once again, and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Warm Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear marry, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... have to take responsibility for. so, for the reason mentioned above, I will...
^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
... the inconvenience that I caused. Further to this, please adjust your leave plan ...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 72, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: april
...your leave plan from february to mid of april april. As I have also changed my ticket from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an from february to mid of april april. As I have also changed my ticket from 17 f...
^^
Line 15, column 135, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...also changed my ticket from 17 february an confirmed to 15 april. my apologi...
^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ebruary an confirmed to 15 april. my apologise once again, and I look forwar...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, after all, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48453608247 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48983479125 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634020618557 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3991094072 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217540104613 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630861219278 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492178746697 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10682566867 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551732438002 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.