You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-Explain the important
-Apologize for the situation
-Suggest a new arrangement
Hi Sam,
it's been a while since we saw each other last time. I hope you have a great time thesedays.
In fact, you know that we have arranged to spend the holidays in London together this year. we prepared for long time for this visit because it means a lot for us to see you. Unfortunately, my spervisor talked to me last week to push me toward finishing my writing and submit my thesis before the new year.
it was sad to write this letter to tell that we can't make it this year. I really regret that I can't show you your gift that I am sure you will fall in love with it. To be honest, I have to listen to my advisor this time, otherwise, I have to pay tuition for the upcoming term.
On the other hand, I'm glad to tell you that I am travelling to Paris in February to attend a conference. If you have a spare time, we can arrange to meet in the downtown. Although it's costy for accomodation, we can enjoy the mouth watering street food and hangout for cheap.
hope to see you soon my man.
All the best,
Dan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Sam, its been a while since we saw each other...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... holidays in London together this year. we prepared for long time for this visit b...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d submit my thesis before the new year. it was sad to write this letter to tell ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t my thesis before the new year. it was sad to write this letter to tell th...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ad to write this letter to tell that we cant make it this year. I really regret that...
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Line 13, column 96, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ke it this year. I really regret that I cant show you your gift that I am sure you w...
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Line 13, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to pay tuition for the upcoming term. On the other hand, Im glad to tell you t...
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Line 17, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...pcoming term. On the other hand, Im glad to tell you that I am travelling t...
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Line 17, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring street food and hangout for cheap. hope to see you soon my man. All t...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...reet food and hangout for cheap. hope to see you soon my man. All the b...
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Line 25, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you soon my man. All the best, Dan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while, in fact, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21393034826 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23160810866 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1315712318 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1538461538 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164307889826 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607190464513 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488043187377 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089405588623 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350270042766 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.