Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope that you are doing fine. I am writing to you with regards to the journey that is planned to visit Jordan in the first three days next week which I am encouraging my son to participate. Also, I am thinkning of joining your group during this trip.
Jordan is a perfect choice as it is a wonderful country which is locate in the heart of the middle east. I have been there for more than five times recently, therefore, I am familiar with pretty much all cities and famous places. That is being said, my job as a professional tour guide will facilitate any complication that you may arise within the visit.
I think that I can build up a tour plan for our visit that most of the students will fall in love unless you have already parepared one. Furthermore, I can recommend some places for outdoor activities so that students can get out of the buses and stretch their muscles with some games on the way. Take cops and robbers as an example for energetic an joyfull game.
With regard to the tour description that we recieved yesterday, what kind of transportation facility will be used? I recommend usinng Grey Hound buses because they have just launched a new fleet with brand new vehicles. Another question that comes into my mind is what is the breakdown of the fees that each students pays? I have a feeling that something is wrong. If I travel by economy airplane, it will be just as equal as the amount stated in the fees.
I look forward for joining you in this trip soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Kareem Jaradat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'located'.
Suggestion: located
...e as it is a wonderful country which is locate in the heart of the middle east. I have...
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Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and robbers as an example for energetic an joyfull game. With regard to the tou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, i think, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.03092783505 429% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 280.0 206.0 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55357142857 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49540138279 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6614087464 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101456706785 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347239159949 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363574106071 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624711733841 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467825534077 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.