For an average person, more than one third of his/her life is spent on education. Without education, people's life become more chaotic and hard to develop over time. That's being said, some people suggest that a person spend all his educational life learning only theoritical information apart from concentrating to the pratical side. In my view, I am totally against this and I believe that education involves alot of practical aspects.
In fact, through somebody's educational journey, especially during high school and university level, there are many hands-on laboratories that need to be passed in order to achieve the degree. A laboratory usually is an industry inspired mini project that is performed in a place full of tools which mimics the real world industry tools. Even for the majors that does not require physical tools such as software engineering, still students accomplish tutorials that are extremely similar to the real industry level work. For example, for software development engineers, there are some pratical labs that require to use several tools to code a web application and deploy it to a stand alone server. Not only these tools are utilized by the local companies, but it also used by world leading companies such as Oracle and Microsoft. Therefore, labs teaches students enough practical skills to be ready for any future job.
If you asked any university student about the most challenging part of any course, he or she will explain that assignments and projects are definitely the bottle neck. For any well developed course, a group of solid assignments and an industry level project should be implemented to pass the course. Although sudents struggle in figuring out how to solve these assignments within time limitation, it forces them to feel the pressure that an employee faces in pratical life. I remember one of the projects that I colloborated with a collegue to finish was on developing an online exam system that could serve thousands of students at once. We were put into the situation that we must review some company's standards and follow the listed instruction particularly to accomplish our ultimate target. It was a legit project that have been fortuantely adopted by the university technology center.
I think that through school life, a person learn both theoritical and practical skills equally. Not only tutorials that is conducted every week, but also the neccessary assignments and projects are all contribute to polish the practical side. Everyone should balance between these skills bacause life needs them.
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:•Say why you would like to go on the trip•Sugges 78
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 79
- You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:explain your situationdescribe your problemstell him 78
- You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Explain the important-Apologize for the situation-Suggest a new arrangement 64
- IELTS WRITING TASK 1: PIE CHARTS 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... chaotic and hard to develop over time. Thats being said, some people suggest that a ...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...der to achieve the degree. A laboratory usually is an industry inspired mini project that ...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ere are some pratical labs that require to use several tools to code a web application...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: STAND_ALONE_NN[1]
Message: This world is usually written together in this context: 'standalone'.
Suggestion: standalone
...de a web application and deploy it to a stand alone server. Not only these tools are utiliz...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: STAND_ALONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'standalone'?
Suggestion: standalone
...de a web application and deploy it to a stand alone server. Not only these tools are utiliz...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: BOTTLE_NECK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bottleneck'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: bottleneck
...gnments and projects are definitely the bottle neck. For any well developed course, a group...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, third, well, apart from, for example, i think, in fact, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21256038647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73498224692 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6038647343 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8373267635 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.578947368 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144536764375 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042442847343 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469489796135 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930041025652 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552010566113 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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