Dear Sir/ Madam,
My name is Neha Arora and I am writing this letter in regards to the new TV I had bought from your Delhi store last week.
To tell you the details, a week back I bought 54’ Samsung LED tv from one of your stores in Delhi. I was thrilled for my new tv and to my surprise when I unwrapped it, the screen was cracked. I even clicked the pictures as a proof and lodge complain to the customer care but to my dissatisfaction no one turned up yet. This is highly unappreciated and unacceptable
I, being one of the loyal customer of yours, putting efforts to pen down the matter once again and I would appreciate a quick action ie either to get my tv repaired or to replace the faulty with the new one. If the will still be unanswered, I am afraid but I will have to drag consumer forum in the matter.
I look forward to hearing from you positively.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Neha Arora and I am writing this letter in regards to the new TV I had bought from your Delhi...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is highly unappreciated and unacceptable I, being one of the loyal customer of yo...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you positively. Yours faithfully
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, still, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29411764706 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53760642472 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2252510222 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173471103433 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780792885732 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632508194931 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11037515948 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507711142507 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.