You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help.Write a letter to the company and in your letterintroduce yourselfexplain th

Dear Sir,

My name is Ajay Sharma one of regular customer of your store. I am writing this letter to seek resolution of problem which i am facing with Panasonic smart television which I purchased from your croma electronic mall a week ago.

I must say you have very vast range of led televisions. Out of them, I selected panasonic 4k model after seeing it amazing picture quality. The engineer came very next day and installed on my living room wall. But what I noticed is after powering on television is there is yellowish tint on picture which was not present on model which is for display. At once, I thought it might be due to display setting which I tried to adjust color, contrast and brightness. However I realized this is some kind of manufacturing defect. I immediately called panasonic helpline number and they assured me that soon engineer will visit at my home to check the problem. Now over 6 days passed but I did not get response from customer service.

As I paid huge amount for this television I could not tolerate any minor problem in this. So I would be grateful if you could replace my television as soon as possible. I hope you would not disappoint me issue a replacement and understand the problem of loyal customer.

Your sincerely,
Anonymous

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ter to seek resolution of problem which i am facing with Panasonic smart televisi...
^
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... adjust color, contrast and brightness. However I realized this is some kind of manufac...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68888888889 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66798485938 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5883493892 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3571428571 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168217350103 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053075398684 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553219107125 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109729939666 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343739811903 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.