You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter with great regrets to inform you that, I cannot accept the job offer of your company for the position of team leader.
Let me explain my circumstances in more detail for declining your offer. First and foremost your company location is way too far from my residence for which I have to commute for 3hours. This is very stressful and I am afraid that this will impact my performance and further more affect my personal life as well .
However, I appreciate and express my gratitude for considering my profile and felt privileged have offered by your esteemed company. Your thoughtfulness and generosity certainly empowered and encouraged me.
Hence, I would love to continue with my current job, I am assigned with new project ,as a project lead I have new exciting Responsibilities and challenges ahead of me and this give me better prospects to my career. Therefore I humbly decline your offer.
Thanks again, Appreciate for your effort and time spent .
Yours faithful.
Paul
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-06 | mohamed.sadiq | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...her more affect my personal life as well . However, I appreciate and express my...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rent job, I am assigned with new project ,as a project lead I have new exciting Re...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... give me better prospects to my career. Therefore I humbly decline your offer. Thanks ...
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Line 11, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ppreciate for your effort and time spent . Yours faithful. Paul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08187134503 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83464577672 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66081871345 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3550346526 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219049325799 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104076728022 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747627347517 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124988668832 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750339003921 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.