You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant . It was a great
success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the
restaurant manager and thank them .Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also
suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear Sir.
I am writing to thanking you for making my birthday more special on your restaurant. My name is Ramandeep Kaur and celebrated
my birthday two days ago in the evening at your amazing restaurant.
I would definitely say that interior of the restaurant is really cozy and comfortable, most importantly soothing music which is played there all day. Secondly, traditional as well as international cuisines were really delicious. All of my friends appreciate the food of your restaurant and variety that you offered in dishes. Moreover, the staff is really supportive. As, my friends forgot to bring the candles, then, they immediately arranged it, eventhough,
it was not their part of job.
I am expressing my gratitude towards the staff and whole restaurant for making this celebration extra special. However, the service is little delayed especially in case of food. I believe that your staff must work on it to deliver food faster the customers.
I am hoping to visit your restaurant soon.
Yours faithfully,
Raman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ur staff must work on it to deliver food faster the customers. I am hoping to v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16071428571 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92391591826 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1915339246 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275830766734 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907691705235 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790514593523 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128234519519 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425613899177 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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